Constructor: Peter Sagal and Mike Selinker
Relative difficulty: Medium
THEME: NEW YORK MARATHON (37A: Event held on the first Sunday in November, and whose path is recreated in this puzzle)— each BOROUGH is represented by a word that can follow that BOROUGH's name in a familiar phrase (45A: What each step in this puzzle lacks, in proper order). Clues for the BOROUGHs indicate the "Steps" (i.e. route) of the marathon:
Theme answers:
Timely and interesting, though there are some issues in the execution. There's something awkward about calling the boroughs "steps" and also having them not in order and also having one of the boroughs (MANHATTAN) be two steps and then also having one of the boroughs (QUEENS) be a differently punctuated word in the clue (QUEEN'S). Further, I cannot figure out the syntax on the revealer, specifically how you can "lack" something "in proper order." I get that the steps all lack their boroughs, and that if you follow the steps, through the various (missing) boroughs, you trace the route of the marathon, but the wording on that revealer clue is still jacked. Write a fuller, clearer revealer. It wasn't hard to figure out, but it wasn't pleasant to read either. Oh, and there's another way QUEEN'S is an outlier, besides the punctuation—all the other boroughs have clues related specifically to their boroughs. DODGERS are from Brooklyn, FERRY goes to/from Staten Island, etc. But QUEEN(')S ... no. Still, withholding the boroughs like this is a pretty interesting variation on the "Word That Can Precede" type of puzzle, and the grid holds up very well considering the theme density. We even get a couple blocks of longer Acrosses in the NW / SE to liven things up. I DON'T MIND that at all.
Issa Rae is great, but RAES (plural) is a shambles. Plural names are never great, but plural uncommon names look ****ing ridiculous. I resent this puzzle for making me think about the president* (27A: Trump is often involved in these) and PAPA ****ing John (43A: Pizza maker John Schnatter's nickname). But putting Stevie in the grid very nearly makes up for it. "DO I DO" looks insane as an answer (I wonder how many people are wondering "What the hell is a DOIDO and why would anyone sing about it?"). But it's got a great beat and groove and ... yeah, let's just listen to Stevie now.
I had trouble only in the SE section, where ATKINS messed me up (48D: Country singer Trace => ADKINS), and ROCK ON (which no one actually says) took forever to come together (47D: Comment with the pinkie and forefinger extended upward). I did not know Café NOIR was a thing. Is that just a pretentious way of saying "black coffee"? Not sure why you'd throw away your NOIR clue like that, especially during Noirvember, but to each his own.
Signed, Rex Parker, King of CrossWorld
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Relative difficulty: Medium
Theme answers:
- [BRONX] CHEER (9A: Step 5: A show of contempt)
- [MANHATTAN] PROJECT (23A: Steps 4 and 6: A 1940s program)
- [QUEEN['?]S] ENGLISH (28A: Step 3: Ann upper-class accent)
- [BROOKLYN] DODGERS (51A: Step 2: An old baseball team)
- [STATEN ISLAND] FERRY (67A: Step 1: A passenger ship since 1817)
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Timely and interesting, though there are some issues in the execution. There's something awkward about calling the boroughs "steps" and also having them not in order and also having one of the boroughs (MANHATTAN) be two steps and then also having one of the boroughs (QUEENS) be a differently punctuated word in the clue (QUEEN'S). Further, I cannot figure out the syntax on the revealer, specifically how you can "lack" something "in proper order." I get that the steps all lack their boroughs, and that if you follow the steps, through the various (missing) boroughs, you trace the route of the marathon, but the wording on that revealer clue is still jacked. Write a fuller, clearer revealer. It wasn't hard to figure out, but it wasn't pleasant to read either. Oh, and there's another way QUEEN'S is an outlier, besides the punctuation—all the other boroughs have clues related specifically to their boroughs. DODGERS are from Brooklyn, FERRY goes to/from Staten Island, etc. But QUEEN(')S ... no. Still, withholding the boroughs like this is a pretty interesting variation on the "Word That Can Precede" type of puzzle, and the grid holds up very well considering the theme density. We even get a couple blocks of longer Acrosses in the NW / SE to liven things up. I DON'T MIND that at all.
Issa Rae is great, but RAES (plural) is a shambles. Plural names are never great, but plural uncommon names look ****ing ridiculous. I resent this puzzle for making me think about the president* (27A: Trump is often involved in these) and PAPA ****ing John (43A: Pizza maker John Schnatter's nickname). But putting Stevie in the grid very nearly makes up for it. "DO I DO" looks insane as an answer (I wonder how many people are wondering "What the hell is a DOIDO and why would anyone sing about it?"). But it's got a great beat and groove and ... yeah, let's just listen to Stevie now.
I had trouble only in the SE section, where ATKINS messed me up (48D: Country singer Trace => ADKINS), and ROCK ON (which no one actually says) took forever to come together (47D: Comment with the pinkie and forefinger extended upward). I did not know Café NOIR was a thing. Is that just a pretentious way of saying "black coffee"? Not sure why you'd throw away your NOIR clue like that, especially during Noirvember, but to each his own.
Signed, Rex Parker, King of CrossWorld
[Follow Rex Parker on Twitter and Facebook]